YESterday's Woman
Yesterday, a man,
a gray-haired man,
cohabitating within an old man’s body rolls in. He
flaunts a Parisian beret fairing a pin of three gold
stars
thrusting up the side of his head.
A man, a thin man, with artist hands, and wire hair
sprouting out from beneath the soft black felt. He sits
down.
This man, who I ate a pasta dinner with
yesterday said,
he just wants to paint the perfect unplanned portrait.
This man, with two languid burgundy tubes acting as
animated legs stares at me,
and as if out or nowhere says, “As you sit there in that
straight back chair,
just as you sit with your hand under your chin--
I would not change a thing about you. No I wouldn’t.
I would paint an impromptu portrait of you, highlighting
the red tint in your hair and
capturing the cobalt of your eyes.”
I smile and reply.
“How much is the portrait in the living room?
The one of...
the beautiful young Asian woman lounging on the velvet
chaise in the afternoon sun?”
He spoke slowly after sipping red wine. “At a gallery ten
thousand, for you I will do half.”
I decline.
I ask him if he was ever married. The golden sign was
mockingly absent.
I don’t know why that question was important. I gaze at the women’s portraits
hung on spare nails around the mock gallery porch dining room.
He hums with conceit in his breath.
“Three wives- not one lasted. Each woman plateaued.”
His long crooked fingers parted the air between us.
“They each left. Actually I’d say I left them.
I was bored. They
didn’t want to grow anymore.”
In half his life
he is a portrait painter; in the other, he is
a vacuum repair man as his trade for a living.
“I want to paint portraits.” He says as he lights a joint.
“I want to paint the perfect unplanned portrait.”
His smoky breath exhales to blow out the burning match
caught between his finger tips.
I believe he wants to paint women--
a woman with luxuriously tussled hair, a porcelain face
of grace,
the kind of woman you want to kiss, who’s eyes want to
kiss you.
The kind of woman that makes you need to
put your parting lips directly onto a taut canvas.
I wonder if the crimson lips he paints might just feel
real.
Maybe he can make an unplanned portrait real. Make a real
woman real.
I shake my head yes and say to the artist, yes I understand.
TJKG
dverse -- more poetry to please
Great story-telling, Tracy. The pace is relaxed and I was able to get into the imagery in the lines. Good wrap with the ultra-cool line, "Make a real woman real." Like that.
ReplyDeleteha. what a character he is....like the details and felt i was right there with you and him...def the eccentric artist...smiles...and knows how to talk...ha.
ReplyDeleteGreat details, I felt like I was there.
ReplyDeletegreat story!
ReplyDelete"The kind of woman that makes you need to
ReplyDeleteput your parting lips directly onto a taut canvas."
The poem blooms here for me.
Thank you for your lovely comment. Made me smile.
Sounds like he doesn't sell many paintings, but he must really clean up in his other job.
ReplyDeleteTracy, this is wonderful, I could see this man perfectly.
ReplyDeletePamela