tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4295850302499151228.post3312367991451487443..comments2023-10-15T05:10:32.919-04:00Comments on Words, Wine, and Wisdom: SHE WALKS IN SILENCE THROUGH THE STREETTracy Kuhn Greenleehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17422064776587522574noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4295850302499151228.post-88307142016256301882013-04-03T09:03:57.333-04:002013-04-03T09:03:57.333-04:00Wonderful. You wove a gentle intensity into this w...Wonderful. You wove a gentle intensity into this write as if begging the reader to understand her need.Beth Winterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00123202473118521429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4295850302499151228.post-65322499636738060092013-04-03T04:01:04.912-04:002013-04-03T04:01:04.912-04:00Beautiful writing - reminded me of listening to pe...Beautiful writing - reminded me of listening to people sharing the stories of their lives, their troubles, their regrets - and all the while knowing that some things, probably really important things, were being held back for reasons I knew nothing about.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4295850302499151228.post-3182774335439997882013-04-02T12:52:50.052-04:002013-04-02T12:52:50.052-04:00the prayer beads against her chest and switching s...the prayer beads against her chest and switching seats for her sanity...my fav images in this...what a tight and emotional write tracy Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4295850302499151228.post-80503020601383503002013-03-29T08:34:04.048-04:002013-03-29T08:34:04.048-04:00you are so very kind to say that to me.. blessings...you are so very kind to say that to me.. blessings and thank you Tracy Kuhn Greenleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17422064776587522574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4295850302499151228.post-50846678247974727682013-03-28T12:33:41.157-04:002013-03-28T12:33:41.157-04:00Breath-takingly beautiful if I only had such an el...Breath-takingly beautiful if I only had such an elegant command of language!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4295850302499151228.post-68454826559450454892013-03-27T20:03:38.662-04:002013-03-27T20:03:38.662-04:00Instead of echoing what others have already said, ...Instead of echoing what others have already said, I would like to add that "tender sadness", "murmured a raw baroque", "a contralto of need" are some interesting and unexpected phrases to describe a voice.Todd Alan Krafthttp://instaneity.com/photo_journal/index.php/entry/the-sound-of-ascensionnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4295850302499151228.post-30379346972935121242013-03-27T00:42:13.535-04:002013-03-27T00:42:13.535-04:00Tracy, I will resist the urge to quote back lines ...Tracy, I will resist the urge to quote back lines to you, and simply say this is poignant and every word well placed.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4295850302499151228.post-77209361922157034262013-03-26T21:01:20.968-04:002013-03-26T21:01:20.968-04:00Her words spoke softness,
a contralto of need,
a c...Her words spoke softness,<br />a contralto of need,<br />a confession to a priest, a release from the want --<br />the white line defense--<br />the difference between secrets and lies.<br /><br /><br />Beautiful writing.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4295850302499151228.post-47244142306083859202013-03-26T18:06:24.986-04:002013-03-26T18:06:24.986-04:00Love the emotion in this poem!Love the emotion in this poem!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4295850302499151228.post-6963076316417759612013-03-26T17:38:24.738-04:002013-03-26T17:38:24.738-04:00Yes, sometimes you have to switch seats to hold on...Yes, sometimes you have to switch seats to hold on to sanity. A good and strong write.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4295850302499151228.post-1058906500731718092013-03-26T16:57:58.250-04:002013-03-26T16:57:58.250-04:00sometimes you have to switch seats to get that san...sometimes you have to switch seats to get that sanity back...and sometimes that gets messy...like exploding stars...but its all part of creation...really fluid flow in this...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4295850302499151228.post-69372945823736752032013-03-26T16:43:34.026-04:002013-03-26T16:43:34.026-04:00I really liked this quite a bit - the words are pe...I really liked this quite a bit - the words are perfectly pitched and I really loved this:<br /><br />She has reasons,<br />they are her reasons hidden in the shadows of her words;<br />her knotted prayer beads knock against her open chest.<br />The rumbling memory of voices,<br />the blending of flesh reminds her that<br />all evolves from an exploding dead star.<br />Heavy metal armor imploded to create you and I. <br /><br />Exquisite!Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4295850302499151228.post-55736551270562844922013-03-26T16:42:47.323-04:002013-03-26T16:42:47.323-04:00...feel the heartbeat.....feel the heartbeat..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4295850302499151228.post-39233297551096754462013-03-26T16:42:24.016-04:002013-03-26T16:42:24.016-04:00Indeed, I could the heartbeat.Indeed, I could the heartbeat.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4295850302499151228.post-7462315905974104712013-03-26T16:37:16.745-04:002013-03-26T16:37:16.745-04:00raw baroque. her words, Listen to me:
this is aur...raw baroque. her words, Listen to me: <br />this is aurally exquisite. <br />your poem reads like a story from the heart.<br />thank you. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com